tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7713833330686372470.post8554848675313567188..comments2023-09-02T03:20:00.374-07:00Comments on Small Crimes: 250-word Flash FictionDave Zeltsermanhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/04007736514118297783noreply@blogger.comBlogger14125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7713833330686372470.post-19165231401032369792019-07-15T09:11:41.816-07:002019-07-15T09:11:41.816-07:00Great jobGreat jobAnonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15459491097283386617noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7713833330686372470.post-75287633742383889782019-04-09T06:27:27.432-07:002019-04-09T06:27:27.432-07:00Absolutely superbAbsolutely superbAnonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02817051219557418539noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7713833330686372470.post-29679231512843328192019-01-30T20:02:36.377-08:002019-01-30T20:02:36.377-08:00It is simply wow. Great work. It is simply wow. Great work. Ruhihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01427805399585500221noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7713833330686372470.post-21542471631511583852018-08-01T06:09:33.144-07:002018-08-01T06:09:33.144-07:00Exelecent story!!
Keep it upExelecent story!!<br />Keep it upahmedhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00513518988888241964noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7713833330686372470.post-33505843857712632042018-06-21T09:34:32.523-07:002018-06-21T09:34:32.523-07:00Short yet stunningly impressive :)Short yet stunningly impressive :)Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03665885571700876129noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7713833330686372470.post-12664267445025021952018-02-07T19:43:35.185-08:002018-02-07T19:43:35.185-08:00not according to ms word--it gives me a word count...not according to ms word--it gives me a word count of 247!Dave Zeltsermanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04007736514118297783noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7713833330686372470.post-63496276231173815762017-09-03T06:54:45.943-07:002017-09-03T06:54:45.943-07:00It's great! But is it a 300 work storyIt's great! But is it a 300 work storyAnonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08594904329552414130noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7713833330686372470.post-19079856211043741682014-11-30T02:44:43.915-08:002014-11-30T02:44:43.915-08:00good onegood oneAnonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14439939828336254919noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7713833330686372470.post-60513635664376037922012-03-09T20:26:49.364-08:002012-03-09T20:26:49.364-08:00Don't change a thing. It's fantastic!Don't change a thing. It's fantastic!Valerienoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7713833330686372470.post-41908692712891513522011-05-16T15:47:18.546-07:002011-05-16T15:47:18.546-07:00Nice story! I thought, yeah, just another typical,...Nice story! I thought, yeah, just another typical, dumb short story, but this one is impressive, and in such short length! I'm impressed; wasn't expecting that ending at all, I just thought that the kid was cruising for a bruising. Very well done :)Stefanienoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7713833330686372470.post-66927353286110032842009-01-12T21:14:00.000-08:002009-01-12T21:14:00.000-08:00Great job... although I think I may be confused. I...Great job... although I think I may be confused. I thought the kid *did* get 'hit,' which is where Lombardo's heart came from...?Eric Langberg (@infernoenigma)https://www.blogger.com/profile/15542778957639889117noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7713833330686372470.post-37827248632751059372007-04-22T08:29:00.000-07:002007-04-22T08:29:00.000-07:00Bloody good story Dave - didn't see the end at all...Bloody good story Dave - didn't see the end at all, assumed the kid was gonna get 'hit'<BR/><BR/>Cheers<BR/><BR/>AliAli Karimhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00640079406581573368noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7713833330686372470.post-40803988542879048842007-03-15T15:26:00.000-07:002007-03-15T15:26:00.000-07:00thanks, Miki. Thing with this one is I could've ju...thanks, Miki. Thing with this one is I could've just as easily made it a 5000 word story, or with some effort, a 60,000 word novel (which I'm considering...)Dave Zeltsermanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04007736514118297783noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7713833330686372470.post-33084313386140169732007-03-15T07:25:00.000-07:002007-03-15T07:25:00.000-07:00Great story, Dave. I'm impressed--250 words isn't ...Great story, Dave. I'm impressed--250 words isn't much.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.com